22A - Elevator Pitch No. 3


https://youtu.be/iv1mdP4o8s8

I have changed several parts of my pitch, not in tremendous ways, but just to fine-tune and include parts so that the product idea comes off as more professional. I started to memorize a few parts of the script and I definitely took less takes to make this pitch work. All of the feedback I received was positive, and helped me get more comfortable in front of the camera.

I only really altered parts of the script, changed my shirt for the presentation to something nicer, and altered the camera angle slightly. Otherwise, the entire presentation had not changed much since the second draft.

Comments

  1. Gaby VazquezJuly 8, 2019 at 11:39 AM

    Hi Jacob,
    I can really see the improvements in your presentation! Explaining what your product will be accomplishing is crucial, and you did a great job going into detail about it. Overall, I think you did a good job on the presentation aspect as well as your speaking. Keep it up!

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  2. Myles FinnJuly 13, 2019 at 3:11 PM

    Hello Jacob, I really liked the several part of your pitch that you slightly changed. It definitely gave your pitch a fine tune up. Its good that you were already able to memorize a few parts of your script so that you were able to do less takes to get the video you wanted! Its great to hear that you are now more comfortable in front of the camera. All of the changes from your second video made for a better third video. Keep up the great work!

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  3. Kimberly PaloJuly 15, 2019 at 1:45 PM

    Hey Jacob.
    Your third elevator pitch is so much better than your first and second one. You look even more professional now. You talk smoothly and confidently. I admire that. I would totally buy anything because you seem so easy to talk to. You don’t seem boring at all. You’ve kept me interested the entire time I was watching. Thank you!

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  4. Connor BrennanJuly 15, 2019 at 2:35 PM

    Hey Jacob, great pitch. I can definitely tell you were much more confident in this pitch as you were much smoother than in previous attempts. Also, you did a great job in going into great detail about your product without sounding like a broken record player. Additionally, you dressed the part as well by looking professional. Overall, keep up the great work!

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  5. JennyJuly 15, 2019 at 5:54 PM

    Hi Jacob! You killed this third elevator pitch! You look so professional and confident. The lighting was good, your outfit was good, and so was the camera angle. It was nice how throughly you explained your product and went at a pace that the audience can understand. This was a huge improvement compared to your other elevator pitches. Nice job!

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